Homework

Hi Seong Won!

I truly enjoyed your composition.

Let\'s go back to what we discussed before.

Please make your sentences as simple as possible.

It would be easier to understand and there would be lesser mistakes, too.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I once put instant cup noodle in to the microwave without water by mistake.
>> I once put instant cup noodles in the microwave without water by mistake.
So the cup noodle changed to black cup noodle.
> So, the cup noodles changed to black cup noodles.
And my mind turnd black too.
>> My mind turned black, too.
But I put water in to the cup noodle and watt untill it is completly cooked and ate it.
>> However, I put water into the cup noodles and waited until it was completely cooked and then, ate it.
It was the worst cup noodle I had ever eaten.

>> It was the worst cup noodles I had ever eaten.