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2019-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> How can conflicts with other people be avoided? Although counterpart talk nonsense, if it is not big problem, let it go. Although pointing out and commenting at that, it doesn't change at all. Rather, relationship will be get worse and counterpart can make bad rumors depending on their character. So, let admit them in front possibly and don't refute them. There are many people to hate that other people become well. So, we have to be polite until you think it is excessive. Either to be polite honestly or not, it is insufficient although other people think it is pretense. So, it will be comfort if thinking that we don't boast in our whole life.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. Being humble is really a food attitude. Whether you are a successful person or not, humility makes you a good person.

- T. Beth

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Although counterpart talk nonsense, if it is not big problem, let it go.

>>> Although the counterpart is talk nonsense, if it\'s not a big problem, let it go.  

>>> OR: Although the counterpart is not making any sense, it it\'s not a big problem, just let it go.

Although pointing out and commenting at that, it doesn\'t change at all.

>>> Even if you point out and comment on that, it doesn\'t change anything at all.  

Rather, relationship will be get worse and counterpart can make bad rumors depending on their character.

>>> Rather, relationship will get worse and the counterpart could make bad rumors depending on their character.  

So, let admit them in front possibly and don\'t refute them. 

>>> So, let them admit the truth up front and don\'t refute them.   
There are many people to hate that other people become well.

>>> There are many people who hate those other people who are doing well.   

So, we have to be polite until you think it is excessive.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: So, we have to be polite until it\'s to the extreme.  

Either to be polite honestly or not, it is insufficient although other people think it is pretense.

>>>  Either we are polite honestly or not, it is insufficient because other people might think it is pretension. 

So, it will be comfort if thinking that we don\'t boast in our whole life.

>>> So, it will be comfortable thinking that we don\'t boast in our whole life.  

 

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