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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. I agree, truth shall always prevail. It could hurt to tell the truth, but telling the truth would preserve the trust you have in each other.
- T. Beth
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When we fight each other, we need to have a heart-to-heart talk to solve misunderstanding.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: When we fight with each other, we need to have a heart-to-heart talk to solve the misunderstanding.
Fight is arose while each other tell a lie.
>>> A fight arose because we tell lies to each other.
>>> OR: Fighting exists because of lies.
So, in order to solve fight, it is essential to tell truth.
>>> So in order to solve the argument, it is essential to tell the truth.
To tell truth each other, people have to be calm and have a heart-to-heart talk.
>>> To tell the truth to each other, people have to be calm and have a heart-to-heart talk.
In my experience, when I don\'t excuse and tell truth to counterpart, he receive my apology and tell me his emotion sincerely regarding on my action.
>>> From my experience, when I don\'t make an excuse and tell the truth to the counterpart, he receives my apology and tell me his emotion sincerely regarding my actions.
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