Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, KC!!!
I do hope that this activity can help you learn more about English. I recommend you to write more and express yourself more.
Have a great time and enjoy!!!
T. Jeny
1. b) The boy was praised by the teacher.
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2. b) The horse was frightened by the noise.
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3. b) He was taken to the hospital by his friends.
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4. a) The town was destroyed by an earthquake.
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5. b) The road was lined with people.
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This morning, when I went out for taking care of our crops, I found that it was snowing and snow already laid think on the ground.
>>This morning, when I went out for taking care of our crops, I found that it was snowing and the snow already laid thick on the ground.
It was too cold to open the door of vinyl greenhouse, I thought.
>>It was too cold to open the vinyl greenhouse\'s door.
So, I phoned my mother in order to ask what I have to do.
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My mother said that don\'t open the door and blanket.
>> My mother said not to open the door and put a blanket.
Anyway, When I was about to go to work, It was changed to rain.
>>Anyway, When I was about to go to work, the snow turned into rain.
Thanks to the rain, I could drive safely, because the rain made snow melt.
>>Thanks to the rain, I could drive safely because the rain made the snow melt.
Luckily, I could go back home as soon as it struck 6. Of course, there were lots of work behind me.
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Anyway, my parents already came back home.
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Because It poured so much on that place where they stayed, they couldn\'t look around there.
>>Because It poured so much on the place where they stayed, so they couldn\'t go around.
It was my story on today.
>>This is my today\'s story.
>>This is my story for today.
Have a good night!
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