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2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. b) The boy was praised by the teacher. 2. b) The horse was frightened by the noise. 3. b) He was taken to the hospital by his friends. 4. a) The town was destroyed by an earthquake. 5. b) The road was lined with people. This morning, when I went out for taking care of our crops, I found that it was snowing and snow already laid think on the ground. It was too cold to open the door of vinyl greenhouse, I thought. So, I phoned my mather in order to ask what I have to do. My mother said that don\'t open the door and blanket. Anyway, When I was about to go to work, It was changed to rain. Thanks to the rain, I could drive safely, because the rain made snow melt. Luckly, I could go back home as soon as it struck 6. Of course there were lots of work behind me. Anyway, my parents already came back home. Because It poured so much on that place where they stayed, they couldn\'t look around there. It was my story on today. Have a good night!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, KC!!!

I do hope that this activity can help you learn more about English. I recommend you to write more and express yourself more.

Have a great time and enjoy!!!

T. Jeny



1. b) The boy was praised by the teacher.

>>correct
 2. b) The horse was frightened by the noise.

>>correct
 3. b) He was taken to the hospital by his friends.

>>correct
 4. a) The town was destroyed by an earthquake.

>>correct
 5. b) The road was lined with people.
>>correct
This morning, when I went out for taking care of our crops, I found that it was snowing and snow already laid think on the ground.

>>This morning, when I went out for taking care of our crops, I found that it was snowing and the snow already laid thick on the ground.
 It was too cold to open the door of vinyl greenhouse, I thought.

>>It was too cold to open the vinyl greenhouse\'s door.

So, I phoned my mother in order to ask what I have to do.

>>correct

 My mother said that don\'t open the door and blanket.

>> My mother said not to open the door and put a blanket.

Anyway, When I was about to go to work, It was changed to rain.

>>Anyway, When I was about to go to work, the snow turned into rain.
 Thanks to the rain, I could drive safely, because the rain made snow melt.

>>Thanks to the rain, I could drive safely because the rain made the snow melt.
 Luckily, I could go back home as soon as it struck 6. Of course, there were lots of work behind me.

>>correct

 Anyway, my parents already came back home.

>>correct

Because It poured so much on that place where they stayed, they couldn\'t look around there.

>>Because It poured so much on the place where they stayed, so they couldn\'t go around.
 It was my story on today.

>>This is my today\'s story.

>>This is my story for today.

Have a good night!

>>correct

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