Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite room is my room in my house
Because my room has a computer and bed and books
Whenever I want to do something, I can do that
So I love my room
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. ^^
Yes! I agree. ^^
My bedroom is also my favorite room in our house.
It\'s where I find peace and relaxation. ^^
~~t. Ally
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My favorite room is my room in my house
>> My favorite room in our house is my bedroom.
Because my room has a computer and bed and books
>> Because my room has a computer, a bed and books.
Whenever I want to do something, I can do that
>> Whenever I want to do something, I can do many things.
So I love my room.
>> CORRECT!
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