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2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Talking sincerely with people you had a conflict with is necessary, but can a heart-to-heart chat always solve a conflict? Of course, heart-to-heart chat doesn't always solve a conflict ,rather it make state get worse. When atmosphere go to worse state, I think heart-to-heart can make opposite effect. So, it works well only in state where conflict is calm in some degree. However, if people are afraid of having heart-to-heart chat due to possibility of getting worse, it is more for conflict to get worse. The less to talk with others, the more conflict to be arose. So, we have to overcome fear regarding conversation and try to talk with each other

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. I agree with you to some degree because there are things best talked about, but there are also things better left unsaid. 

- T. Beth

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Of course, heart-to-heart chat doesn\'t always solve a conflict ,rather it make state get worse.

>>> OR: Of course, heart-to-heart chat doesn\'t always solve a conflict but rather it could make the situation worse.    

When atmosphere go to worse state, I think heart-to-heart can make opposite effect.

>>> OR: When the atmosphere leads to a worse state, I think a heart-to-heart talk can make an opposite effect.   

So, it works well only in state where conflict is calm in some degree.

>>> So, it works well only in a state where the conflict is calm in some degree.   

However, if people are afraid of having heart-to-heart chat due to possibility of getting worse, it is more for conflict to get worse.

>>> However, if people are afraid of having a heart-to-heart chat due to the possibility of it getting worse, it could cause the conflict to get worse.    

The less to talk with others, the more conflict to be arose.

>>> The less we talk with others, the more conflict would arose.     

So, we have to overcome fear regarding conversation and try to talk with each other.

>>>   CORRECT. 


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