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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. I agree with you to some degree because there are things best talked about, but there are also things better left unsaid.
- T. Beth
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Of course, heart-to-heart chat doesn\'t always solve a conflict ,rather it make state get worse.
>>> OR: Of course, heart-to-heart chat doesn\'t always solve a conflict but rather it could make the situation worse.
When atmosphere go to worse state, I think heart-to-heart can make opposite effect.
>>> OR: When the atmosphere leads to a worse state, I think a heart-to-heart talk can make an opposite effect.
So, it works well only in state where conflict is calm in some degree.
>>> So, it works well only in a state where the conflict is calm in some degree.
However, if people are afraid of having heart-to-heart chat due to possibility of getting worse, it is more for conflict to get worse.
>>> However, if people are afraid of having a heart-to-heart chat due to the possibility of it getting worse, it could cause the conflict to get worse.
The less to talk with others, the more conflict to be arose.
>>> The less we talk with others, the more conflict would arose.
So, we have to overcome fear regarding conversation and try to talk with each other.
>>> CORRECT.
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