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2019-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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The most interesting thing was that I bought a book and reading the book for me. I didn't know most what I want to do or I want to something. so, I didn't know what I like something. But,on vacation, I was interesting and pleased becuse I can gave present which I want to mtself.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you later! ~T. Elisha
The most interesting thing was that I bought a book and reading the book for me.
>> The most interesting thing for me was a book I have bought and have read.
I didn\'t know most what I want to do or I want to something.
>> I usually don\'t know what I want.
so, I didn\'t know what I like something.
>> I don\'t realize if there is something I want.
But,on vacation, I was interesting and pleased becuse I can gave present which I want to myself.
>> But when I\'m on a vacation, I feel very pleased because I can buy a present for myself which is something I really want.

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