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2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

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Write something about your vacation on Jeju island. (12 sentences) I went to Jeju island for vacation. I can tell you It was really fantastic even though it rained for two days. I stayed at guest house for 2 days. I met good people during staying at guest house. I stil keep in touch with friends I met in Jeju. I ate a lot of delicious foods. I made really good friends and I saw the sunset. Overall, It was fantastic.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Charlie!


It\'s really nice to be able to take a vacation from work. Indeed, Jeju island is a nice place to relax and meet some new friends. I know that the memories you made during your vacation on Jeju island are something you can always remember.


~Teacher Josephine~

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I went to Jeju island for vacation.

>> CORRECT


I can tell you It was really fantastic even though it rained for two days.

>> I can tell you, it was really fantastic, even though it rained for two days.


 I stayed at guest house for 2 days.

>> I stayed at a guest house for 2 days.


 I met good people during staying at guest house.

>> I met good people during my stay at the guest house.


I stil keep in touch with friends I met in Jeju.

>> I still keep in touch with the friends I met on Jeju island.


I ate a lot of delicious foods.

>> CORRECT.


 I made really good friends and I saw the sunset.

>>  I made really good friends and I watched the sunset.


 Overall, It was fantastic.

>> CORRECT

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