Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
It\'s really nice to be able to take a vacation from work. Indeed, Jeju island is a nice place to relax and meet some new friends. I know that the memories you made during your vacation on Jeju island are something you can always remember.
~Teacher Josephine~
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I went to Jeju island for vacation.
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I can tell you It was really fantastic even though it rained for two days.
>> I can tell you, it was really fantastic, even though it rained for two days.
I stayed at guest house for 2 days.
>> I stayed at a guest house for 2 days.
I met good people during staying at guest house.
>> I met good people during my stay at the guest house.
I stil keep in touch with friends I met in Jeju.
>> I still keep in touch with the friends I met on Jeju island.
I ate a lot of delicious foods.
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I made really good friends and I saw the sunset.
>> I made really good friends and I watched the sunset.
Overall, It was fantastic.
>> CORRECT
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