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2019-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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When I listen to music, my inside feel better I listen to exciting music for sad feeling When I can\'t sleep well and I make some nervous, I listen to quiet music So I think that music is mind controling in my life

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]. ^^


I am happy to hear that music helps you in a lot of ways! ^^

I hope it continues to be one of the things that make you feel better after a long day.


~~t. Ally



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When I listen to music, my inside feel better

>> When I listen to music, my insides feel better.


 I listen to exciting music for sad feeling

>> I listen to exciting music when I feel sad.


 When I can\'t sleep well and I make some nervous, I listen to quiet music

>> When I can\'t sleep well and I feel nervous, I listen to calming music.


 So I think that music is mind controling in my life

>> So I think music helps me control my mindset in life.

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