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I went to the island that is one of many island in Namhae with family during winter vacation.

>> I went to one of the many island in Namhae with my family during winter vacation.

 we have gone to see new year sunrising for good fortune a year. at first year, I didn’t like because of just my non-trip.

>> We have gone there to see the new year\'s first sunrise for good fortune.

at first year, I didn’t like because of just my non-trip.

>> At first,  didn\'t like it because I don\'t like going on trips.

now, That is a important event for our family.

>> correct!

or:

>> That is now an important event for our family.
 During my family vacation, the one of best things realy had seen the ‘haeyure’ that she have catched a sea food as diving in the sea.

>>  During my family vacation, one of the best things we had seen was ‘haeyure’ when she had caught seafood while diving in the sea.

I thought they were professional person.

>> I think they\'re very professional people.