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Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this. All these predictions about the future and mother nature is quite overwhelming. We should be concerned about it because it is us who will suffer in the end. Although, not a lot of people would think about the dangers global warming could cause.
- T. Beth
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Trump who is president in USA claim that global warming is natural effect while referring to climate cycle.
>>> Trump, who is the president in USA, claims that global warming is a natural effect of the climate cycle.
But, I think current climate warming has arisen by people destroying earth.
>>> But, I think the current climate warming has arise because of people destroying earth.
The bigger concern is for global warming to increase surface of sea caused by melted ice in South pole.
>>> A bigger concern is for global warming to increase surface of the sea caused by melted ice in the South pole.
While relating this phenomenon, Tomorrow which was famous movie warned nature\'s attack as ice age which can come earlier due to this.
>>> In relation to this phenomenon, a famous movie which warns about nature\'s attack as an early onset of ice age will premier tomorrow.
In that movie, the north hemisphere is frozen by returning to ice age and advanced country can\'t avoid this disaster.
>>> In that movie, the north hemisphere is frozen by returning to ice age and even advanced countries wouldn\'t be able to avoid this disaster.
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