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2019-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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1. Because I was tired, I decided to go home. 2. As you know, I work very hard. 3. The man whom she married was an old friend of mine. 4. The house where I live is very small. 5. She was upset because there was no one to help her. 6. While I was having a shower, I slipped on the floor. 7. Because she was so kind, people liked her. 8. He has acted in a film which I have forgotten the name of. As soon as I finished our conversation this morning, I brought a memo which I wrote some information related with high blood pressure and arrhythmia( an irregular pulse). I just tried to find this information on the internet. When I gave the memo to my father, against my expectations , he pointed out my worst writing style. ^^; He said \"your writing style is similar to my granddaughter\'s writing style..haha.. Maybe, He was embarrassed little bit. Anyway, I told him about your concern.. And my father was fully appreciated in your concern..^^* Have a great weekend~!

강사 첨삭

Hello KC,

Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us. 

I commend you for being so active and alert to listen and speak the language; continue that attitude because you can achieve many things in learning English.

Don\'t pull yourself down!!!!

T. Jeny


1. Because I was tired, I decided to go home.

>>correct
 2. As you know, I work very hard.

>>correct
 3. The man whom she married was an old friend of mine.

>>The man that she married was an old friend of mine.
 4. The house where I live is very small.

>>correct
 5. She was upset because there was no one to help her.

>>She was upset because she had no one to help her.
 6. While I was having a shower, I slipped on the floor.

>>correct
 7. Because she was so kind, people liked her.

>>correct
 8. He has acted in a film which I have forgotten the name of.
>>He has acted in a film the name of which I have forgotten.  
As soon as I finished our conversation this morning, I brought a memo which I wrote some information related with high blood pressure and arrhythmia( an irregular pulse).

>>As soon as I finished our conversation this morning, I brought a memo which I wrote some information related to high blood pressure and arrhythmia( an irregular pulse).

I just tried to find this information on the internet.

>>correct
When I gave the memo to my father, against my expectations, he pointed out my worst writing style. ^^;

>>correct
He said \"your writing style is similar to my granddaughter\'s writing style..haha..

>>correct

Maybe, He was embarrassed little bit. 

>>Maybe, He was embarrassed a little bit. 

 Anyway, I told him about your concern.

>>correct

 And my father was fully appreciated in your concern..^^*

>> And my father fully appreciated your concern..^^*
 Have a great weekend~!

>>correct

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