Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will keep it in my account.
I have to save money for my future.
I think there\'s going to be a lot of money to be spent.
But if I have to spend money at anything, I think I will spend them on buying goods.
I want to buy all goods I like.
I\'m curiouse about when my writing skills will be better.
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
You always have to write from the heart.
You have to write what you know.
I told you plenty of times that you have potential.
Keep trying and you will be surprised one day.
~~ Teacher Sharon
I will keep it in my account.
>> Correct
I have to save money for my future.
>> Correct
I think there\'s going to be a lot of money to be spent.
>> Correct
But if I have to spend money at anything, I think I will spend them on buying goods.
>> However, if I have to spend money on anything, I think I will spend it on buying goods.
I want to buy all goods I like.
>> I want to buy all the goods that I like.
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