Homework
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강사 첨삭
It’s magical and marvelous Monday today and let us start this day with a prayer of thanks and grace. Thank you for having the time for your homework. Your hard work and perseverance will pay off because you are interested and eager to be better. Have a nice day ahead. Talk to you later. Ciao!
T. Andi =)
What is happiness?
In my opinion, happiness is being satisfied as I am. There is
no absolute standard for happiness. Whatever someone has, he/she can be happy
if he/she is satisfied with it.
>> Perfectly said and written [이름]. I absolutely
agree with this. =)
In additon, happiness can come from believing the future will
be better. People can be happier by imagining the brilliant future.
>> In addition, happiness can come from
believing the future will be better. People can be happier by imagining the
brilliant future. (Having a positive thought will produce a positive and
better future, right?)
When the person is satisfied as he/she is and also is trying
to improve oneself dreaming a great future, he/she is the happiest person.
>> When the person is satisfied as he/she is and is also trying to improve one’s self and dreaming of a great future, he/she is the happiest person.
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