Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
It\'s great to know about the different drinking cultures in Korea. I know that you pay much respect to the elderly and seniors and that is what I like about your culture. You can enjoy and respect each other while drinking together. I think it is something you can be proud of.
~Teacher Josephine~
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Let me explain about drinkink culture. \\
>> Let me tell about the drinking culture in Korea.
There are kind of culture.
>> There many kinds of drinking culture.
However, I can not tell you all about it because I do not like drinking soju or beer, so I do not know well.
>> However, I cannot tell them all to you because I don\'t drink much. I don\'t like drinking soju or beer, so I don\'t know well about them.
When you drink with old people you have to be polite.
>> CORRECT
I mean you should hold the glass with your hands.
>> CORRECT
In addition, it is not polite to drink alone.
>> CORRECT
However, when you drink with your friends everything is ok.
>> CORRECT
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