Homework

Hi, Charlie!

Congratulations for your graduation! It\'s truly once in a lifetime experience. It\'s also one of most memorable experiences we could ever have. Thank you for sharing your experience!

~ Teacher Josephine~

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Yesterday is my graduation ceremony, so I went to my university. \\

>> Yesterday was my graduation ceremony, so I went to university.

There were so many students and their parents, so there was traffic jam.

>> There were so many students with their parents, so there was a heavy traffic.

 I met my university friends and they gave me flowers a lot.

>> I met my university friends and they gave me a lot of flowers.

I took a picture with all of my friends and I took a picture with professor.

>> I took pictures with my friends and professors.

After thah, my parents came to university.

>> After that, my parents came to the university.

We took a picture ! Yesterday is really busy, but it was really really fantastic.

>> We took a picture together, too. Yesterday was really busy but it was fantastic at the same time.

I want to say thank you to them.

>> I want to tell my gratitude to them.

It is a memorable memory. THANK YOU

>> It was a memorable experience. Thank you.