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2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I bought my mobile phone!^^ 2. The book\'s title is 104 Story Treehouse. 3. I want to be a designer when I was young. 4. I think I\'ll be an author or a surgeon. 5. My sister was probably a middle scoole studant. 6. You are really good at droing,Anna! 7. I think you\'ll be a teacher. 8. That\'ll nice! 9. My frand,Ghmen want to be a movie director. 10. My Mum want to be a hair stylist when she was young.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. I bought my mobile phone!^^

>> or: I bought myself a mobile phone!

2. The book\'s title is 104 Story Treehouse.

>> correct~~

3. I want to be a designer when I was young.

>> I wanted to be a designer when I was young.

4. I think I\'ll be an author or a surgeon.

>> correct~~

5. My sister was probably a middle scoole studant.

>> My sister was probably a middle school student.

6. You are really good at droing,Anna!

>> You are really good at drawing, Anna!

7. I think you\'ll be a teacher.

>> correct~~

8. That\'ll nice!

>> correct~~

9. My frand,Ghmen want to be a movie director.

>> My friend, Ghmen wants to be a movie director.

10. My Mum want to be a hair stylist when she was young.

>> My Mum wanted to be a hairstylist when she was young.

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