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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. There is really no way to stop natural disasters form happening. What we can do is to be ready and prepared for it.
- T. Beth
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Why disaster arisen in whole world affect more damage to poor people?
>>> Why do disasters that arise in the whole world cause more damage to poor people?
This answer can be derived from man-made disaster made by unequal social structure.
>>> The answer can be derived form man-made disasters caused by unequal social structure.
Each government is too incompetent to prevent disaster early or to deal with it when arising, so they can\'t minimize disaster\'s damage.
>>> Each government is too incompetent to prevent disaster early or to deal with it when arising, so they can\'t minimize the damage it could bring.
It is important to realize that it is not only natural incident, but also has economical and political character.
>>> It is important to realize that it is not only a natural incident, but also has economical and political connections.
Although disaster is natural while nature attack initially for terrible minutes or hours, state before or after disaster is only social phenomenon.
>>> Although a disaster is natural and happens initially for terrible minutes or hours, the state before or after disaster is a social phenomenon.
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