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2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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My favorite Korean drama is \"W\" \"W\" is broadcast on television in 2016 The story is \"the cartoonist\'s daughter go into the computer of drawing and then she is happened weird happenings \" This drama is very interesting

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Hi [이름]! ^^

I will try to look for this drama and watch it.

I am currently watching Prison Playbook. ^^

Try and watch it too!

See you in class. ^^

~~t. Ally

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My favorite Korean drama is \"W\".

>> CORRECT!

\"W\" is broadcast on television in 2016

>> \"W\" was broadcast on television in 2016.

The story is \"the cartoonist\'s daughter go into the computer of drawing and then she is happened weird happenings \"

>> The story is about a cartoonist\'s daughter who went into the computer and became a drawing, then a lot of weird things happened.

This drama is very interesting

>> This drama is very interesting. (Don\'t forget your punctuations.)

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