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2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

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~What is your opinion about the alcohol ban in some countries? I can not tell exactly my opinion. I can not chose. I don't know if I will approve or disagree. That's a such tough call. Is it all ban to drink the alcohol? If not, I think it is ok. Some countries need to law about the alcohol. All country has law about that. Therefore, is not it all ban to drink. I think it doesnt matter. However, if all the alcohol is ban, i do not agree.

강사 첨삭


Hi, Charlie!


Thank you for always doing your homework and sharing your opinions about every topic we discuss and talk about. Way to go!


~Teacher Josephine~

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I can not tell exactly my opinion.

>> I couldn\'t tell my exact opinion.


I can not chose.

>> I couldn\'t choose.


I don\'t know if I will approve or disagree.

>> CORRECT


That\'s a such tough call.

>> That\'s such a tough call.


Is it all ban to drink the alcohol?

>> Is it entirely ban to drink alcohol?


If not, I think it is ok.

>> CORRECT


Some countries need to law about the alcohol.

>> Some countries need to have a law about alcohol.


All country has law about that.

>> All countries have laws about it.


Therefore, is not it all ban to drink.

>> Therefore, it is not entirely ban to drink.


I think it doesn\'t matter.

>> CORRECT


However, if all the alcohol is ban, i do not agree.

>> However, if all the alcohol is banned, I will disagree.


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