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2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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When I am feeling stress, I stay in my room at listen to music or watch some vidio in You Tube channel. Wnen I listen to music, I also sing very ve~~~ry loudly and also dance. I know that it can be hear strange. But when I sing and dance I feel really good. And there is no one in my room so I don\'t have to be shy.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]^^

How are you today? Have you done all your homework yet? (hehe) - I\'m just teasing you^^


You know I do this too when I\'m alone at home and I turn the house upside down sometimes^^


QUESTION: What do you do to relax when you\'re feeling stressed? Please explain your answer. 


When I am feeling stress, I stay in my room at listen to music or watch some vidio in You Tube channel.

>>When I\'m stressed, I listen to music in my room or watch video through YouTube.

Wnen I listen to music, I also sing very ve~~~ry loudly and also dance.

>>When I listen to music, I also dance and sing very loudly.

I know that it can be hear strange.

>>I know my voice is strange.

But when I sing and dance I feel really good.

>>CORRECT!

OR: But I feel great when I sing and dance.

And there is no one in my room so I don\'t have to be shy.

>>And I don\'t have to be ashamed because there\'s no one in my room.

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