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That\'s true, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding this matter. ^^
I agree with your observation.
Someday I hope the traditions become less close- minded. ^^
~~t. Ally
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The LGBT communities are hard for people to accept.
>> CORRECT!
I think the reason is the faith and tradition.
>> I think some of the reasons are faith and tradition.
Long time ago, the people thought that to do marrage with a man and a woman.
>> A long time ago, most people thought that marriage should only be between a man or a woman.
Nowadays,that is against the traditional mind.
>> Nowadays, that is against traditional thinking.
So I think that is why people are not accepted.
>> So this is why these people are not accepted.
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