Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, most of the times I don\'t eat snacks and wait until dinner or lunch.
But when I\'m really hungry, I find something to eat.
I can always find a food I can eat.
I can\'t think about what to write here.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Please take note of the correct use of \"however\" instead of \"but\" to begin your sentence.
I\'ve noticed this as a common mistake.
Please apply this in your future compositions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, most of the times I don\'t eat snacks and wait until dinner or lunch.
>> Most of the time, I don\'t eat snacks and I just wait for dinner or lunch
But when I\'m really hungry, I find something to eat.
>> However, when I\'m really hungry, I find something to eat.
I can always find a food I can eat.
>> I can always find food that I can eat.
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