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강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
I agree with about having a few friends is better. It\'s because you know them well and you can share anything about them. You can stay true of yourself with them. Having a few true friends ius better than having many fake friends. However, I also admire those people who have many friends!
~Teacher Josephine~
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I have a few friends.
>> CORRECT
Therefore I know what benefits of having few friends.
>> Therefore, I know the benefits of having a few friends.
First, you can tell everything to them.
>> CORRECT
If you have a few friends they might be your best friends.
>> If you have a few friends they can be your best friends.
Second, you can have a lot of personnel time.
>> Second, you cam have a love of private time.
You can enjoy your hobbies.
>> CORRECT
In addition, It makes more friendly because you hang out your few friends.
>> In addition, hanging out with just a few friends will make us become closer each other.
It is good for us. you can tell your secret to them.
>> It is good for us because we can tell our secrets to them.
I pursue having few friends.
>> CORRECT
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