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2019-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

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What are the benefits of having few friends? I have a few friends. Therefore I know what benefits of having few friends. First, you can tell everything to them. If you have a few friends they might be your best friends. Second, you can have a lot of personnel time. You can enjoy your hobbies. In addition, It makes more friendly because you hang out your few friends. It is good for us. you can tell your secret to them. I pursue having few friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Charlie!


I agree with about having a few friends is better. It\'s because you know them well and you can share anything about them. You can stay true of yourself with them. Having a few true friends ius better than having many fake friends. However, I also admire those people who have many friends!


~Teacher Josephine~

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I have a few friends.

>> CORRECT


Therefore I know what benefits of having few friends.

>> Therefore, I know the benefits of having a few friends.


First, you can tell everything to them.

>> CORRECT


If you have a few friends they might be your best friends.

>> If you have a few friends they can be your best friends.


Second, you can have a lot of personnel time.

>> Second, you cam have a love of private time.



You can enjoy your hobbies.

>> CORRECT


In addition, It makes more friendly because you hang out your few friends.

>> In addition, hanging out with just a few friends will make us become closer each other.


It is good for us. you can tell your secret to them.

>> It is good for us because we can tell our secrets to them.


I pursue having few friends.

>> CORRECT

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