homework
학생이 쓴 원문
>> When you were a child, what things were you afraid of?
When I am a child, I was afraid of korea monster.
Korean monster wear white dress. and It always go night.
so, When I am sleep, Room don`t turn off. but This now, I do very sleep.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]ard! I used to be afraid of monsters too! But now that I\'m an adult, my fears changed. See you! ~T. Elisha
When I am a child, I was afraid of korea monster.
>> When I was a child, I used to be afraid of a Korean monster.
Korean monster wear white dress.
>> A Korean monster wears a white dress.
and It always go night.
>> It always go out at night.
so, When I am sleep, Room don`t turn off.
>> That is why when I go to sleep, I don\'t turn switch my lights off.
but This now, I do very sleep.
>> But, I do this now before I sleep.
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