homework
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What do you think is the worst crime a person could commit? Why?
It is suidcide. Life is precious. Commit suicide, Family is a hard time. It`s hard time, but I think I enjoy life time.
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It is suidcide.
>> It\'s suicide.
Life is precious.
>> correct!
Commit suicide, Family is a hard time.
>> If you commit suicide, your family will have a difficult time.
It`s hard time, but I think I enjoy life time.
>> You might be facing a difficult time, but I think we should enjoy life more.
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