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Hi [이름]. ^^
Chocolate flavored ice cream is very yummy!
Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^
Also, I would like to remind you to always put a period (.) or a punctuation mark after every sentence. ^^
Happy weekend!
~~t. Ally
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I like ice cream
>> I like ice cream.
I useally eat in winter more than summer
>> I usually eat ice cream in winter more than in summer.
Because when I ate a ice cream in summer, I feel more thirsty
>> Because when I eat ice cream in summer, I feel more thirsty.
And my favorite flavor is a chocolate flavor
>> And my favorite ice cream flavor is chocolate.
It is the taste of sweets and bitters
>> It tastes both sweet and bitter.
I like this
>> I like this.
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