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2019-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I like ice cream I useally eat in winter more than summer Because when I ate a ice cream in summer, I feel more thirsty And my favorite flavor is a chocolate flavor It is the taste of sweets and bitters I like this

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]. ^^


Chocolate flavored ice cream is very yummy!

Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^

Also, I would like to remind you to always put a period (.) or a punctuation mark after every sentence. ^^

Happy weekend!



~~t. Ally



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I like ice cream

>> I like ice cream.
 I useally eat in winter more than summer

>> I usually eat ice cream in winter more than in summer.


 Because when I ate a ice cream in summer, I feel more thirsty

>> Because when I eat ice cream in summer, I feel more thirsty.


 And my favorite flavor is a chocolate flavor

>> And my favorite ice cream flavor is chocolate.


 It is the taste of sweets and bitters

>> It tastes both sweet and bitter.


 I like this

>> I like this.

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