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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. A lot of children are picky with the food they eat, but most of them grow out of it and change their eating habits as they grow older. Good thing you did.
- T. Beth
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I was picky-eater when I was young, but now I don\'t choose and eat particular food since parents tried to change my eating habit.
>>> I was a picky-eater when I was young, but now I don\'t choose and eat particular food since my parents tried to change my eating habit.
My mother try to made a curiosity to me while eating food which I hate and response with telling it is delicious.
>>> My mother tried to make me curiosity when eating food which I hate and told me it is delicious.
Thanks to this, I had concern with various food beside hate one and can try to eat these food.
>>> Thanks to this, I am curious with various food beside those ones I hate and can try to eat them.
If my mother doesn\'t try to do this, I think I always eat only meat and never try to be familiar with vegetables.
>>> If my mother didn\'t try to do this, I think I would always eat only meat and never tried to be familiar with vegetables.
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