Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to the London Harry Potter studio.
It\'s the place where all the Harry Potter fans want to visit.
I want to go there even if it\'s not the next vacation.
It is my bucket list to visit there.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Thank you for exerting efforts to do your composition.
I know you will be busy soon.
I do believe that you can still handle everything well.
Keep working hard!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to go to the London Harry Potter studio.
>> Correct
It\'s the place where all the Harry Potter fans want to visit.
>> Correct
I want to go there even if it\'s not the next vacation.
>> I want to go there even if it\'s not on my next vacation.
It is my bucket list to visit there.
>> It\'s part of my bucket list to visit there.
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