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학생이 쓴 원문
This weekend I really want to go to the comic book cafe
This friday I went this place in first time
I had a fun time
So I want to go to this place again
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That\'s a great idea. ^^
Maybe you can go there again!
Have fun, sweetie. ^^
~~t. Ally
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This weekend I really want to go to the comic book café
>> This weekend, I really want to go to the comic book café.
This friday I went this place in first time
>> This Friday, I went to this place for the first time.
I had a fun time
>> I had a fun time.
So I want to go to this place again
>> So I want to go to this place again.
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