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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. There are a lot of home remedies you can do to relieve a stomachache. I hope they work well for you.
- T. Beth
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First, I drink some honey water in order to support moisture in body and eat rice soup, which can reduce digestion organ\'s stress and diarrhea due to absorbing moisture, when hungry.
>>> First, I drink some honey water in order to hydrate my body and eat rice soup which can reduce stress on the digestive organs and diarrhea due to loss of water in the body.
After that, I usually drink plum extract ,which is outstanding in sterilization and detoxification, so that it has a good effect when stomachache happen.
>>> After that, I usually drink plum extract which is excellent in sterilization and detoxification, and can relieve stomachache.
Finally, I think it is best way, which is drinking ginger tea which can increase ability of digestion and remain warm in stomach.
>>> Finally, I think it is best way to drink ginger tea which can improve digestion and keep the stomach warm.
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