Homework

2019-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I think sleeping take most of my time in day. I sleep about 7 hours and 30 minutes, and it is the longest thing I do. And when it is holiday, I sleep about 10 hours. I want to sleep 12 hours, actually. But I know my mom woudn\'t let me to do it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for sending your homework.

There were a few minor mistakes that you have to take note of.

The main focus is the use of conjunctions.

Please practice that more.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think sleeping take most of my time in day.
>> I think sleeping takes most of my time in a day.
I sleep about 7 hours and 30 minutes, and it is the longest thing I do.
>> I sleep for about 7 hours and 30 minutes, and it is the longest thing I do.
And when it is holiday, I sleep about 10 hours.
>> Also, when it is a holiday, I sleep for about 10 hours.
I want to sleep 12 hours, actually.
>> I actually want to sleep for 12 hours.
But I know my mom woudn\'t let me to do it.

>> However, I know my mom woudn\'t let me do it.

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