homework
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After exercising, I feel refreshed. But I also feel tired. So I don\'t like exercising. But my mom told me that you need to exercise. So I everyday do exercising.
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Writing Task: How do you usually feel after exercising? Please explain your answer.
After exercising, I feel refreshed.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I feel refreshed after exercising.
But I also feel tired.
>>CORRECT!
OR: But it\'s also tiring.
So I don\'t like exercising.
>>CORRECT!
But my mom told me that you need to exercise.
>>But my mom told me that I need to exercise.
So I everyday do exercising.
>>So I exercise every day.
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