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Hi [이름]!
Oh, that sounds like a wonderful idea! ^^
I think you should go through with that plan.
It\'s okay, sweetie.
Rest as much as you need to. ^^
Thank you for the update!
See you! ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I have a freedom for 1 day, I will research on a trip abroad.
>> If I had freedom for 1 day, I will search for a trip abroad.
This summer vacation, I want to trip to Japan.
>> This summer vacation, I want to go on a trip to Japan.
For a few days, I have a melancholy.
>> For a few days, I have been experiencing melancholy.
Because I have much to do.
>> Because I have so much to do.
So today I decide to take a rest for 1 day.
>> So today, I decided to take a day of rest.
See you tomorrow~~
>> CORRECT!
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