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2019-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If I have a freedom for 1 day, I will research on a trip abroad. This summer vacation, I want to trip to Japan. For a few days, I have a melancholy. Because I have much to do. So today I decide to take a rest for 1 day. See you tomorrow~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Oh, that sounds like a wonderful idea! ^^

I think you should go through with that plan.

It\'s okay, sweetie.

Rest as much as you need to. ^^

Thank you for the update!

See you! ^^


~~t. Ally


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If I have a freedom for 1 day, I will research on a trip abroad.

>> If I had freedom for 1 day, I will search for a trip abroad.


 This summer vacation, I want to trip to Japan.
>> This summer vacation, I want to go on a trip to Japan.


 For a few days, I have a melancholy.

>> For a few days, I have been experiencing melancholy.


 Because I have much to do.

>> Because I have so much to do.


 So today I decide to take a rest for 1 day.

>> So today, I decided to take a day of rest.


 See you tomorrow~~

>> CORRECT!

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