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2019-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I almost be useing time to work in my office all day long. Usually I working half in day From 7:00am to 7:00pm. And I work on with computer always. Because My main job is internet-marketer so I web-search and bench-marking and write to report about it. I will take care of my son for the rest of time.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sending your homework.

Please take note of the corrections below.

Always aim to make clear and simple sentences.

Keep practicing!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I almost be useing time to work in my office all day long.

>> I usually spend my time in the office all day long.
Usually I working half in day From 7:00am to 7:00pm.

>> I usually work from 7:00 a.m. to 7:00 p.m.
And I work on with computer always.

>> I always work using a computer.

Because My main job is internet-marketer so I web-search and bench-marking and write to report about it.

>> This is because I\'m an Internet marketer so I search the web and write reports about what I find.
I will take care of my son for the rest of time.^^

>> I take care of my son for the remaining hours of the day.

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