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2019-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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-Homework- >>Do you like meeting new people? I used to like meeting new people because I liked to have new friends at that time. But, I don\'t like it now. I am tired to deal with problems which happens among people. Sometimes, I got hurt from them. That\'s why I like to meet old friends who get along very well with me. Hi, Teacher Jean. It\'s pleasure to have you as my english teacher. Talk to you later. - Jake.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jake!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

-Homework-
Do you like meeting new people?

I used to like meeting new people because I liked to have new friends at that time.
>> correct

But, I don\'t like it now.
>> or: However, I\'ve changed as I\'ve aged.

I am tired to deal with problems which happens among people. Sometimes, I got hurt from them.
>> I no longer want to get involved in conflicts between people as there were times that I got hurt from them.

That\'s why I like to meet old friends who get along very well with me.
>> For this reason, I prefer meeting old friends who get along very well with me.

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