Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will stop time when I have to get up to go to school.
I don\'t want to go to school.
I will stop time until I can\'t stay lying.
It was my dream to become a person with the ability to stop time.
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
You did a good job on your homework today.
Continue expressing yourself.
You always have good ideas.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I will stop time when I have to get up to go to school.
>> I want to stop time when I have to get up to go to school.
I don\'t want to go to school.
>> Correct
I will stop time until I can\'t stay lying.
>> I want to stop time until I\'m good and ready to get out of bed.
It was my dream to become a person with the ability to stop time.
>> Correct
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