Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
I think you are right. It\'s a bit rude to help others without asking them if they really need a help or not! So sometimes people feel badeven though we help them because it is something that they don\'t want us to do from them. It\'s better to ask them first!
~Teacher Josephine~
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I think that the best way to help others is to ask if they need help.
>> CORRECT
Why I think that way because someone does not need help.
>> Why I think that way is because some people don\'t need help.
Therefore, sometimes it is a little bit rude.
>> CORRECT
If you see someone needs help, you ask someone first.
>> If you see someone who needs help, you ask that person first.
I think it is the best way.
>> CORRECT
However, it depends on situation.
>> However, it depends on the situation.
If there is emergency, you should help first.
>> CORRECT
If you want to help someone, you should ask and help them.
>> CORRECT
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