Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You have expressed yourself in a specific way.
I truly appreciate your style.
Please take note of the common sentence patterns below.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I have willing to be stop time, I will have time for me.
>> If I have the ability to stop time, I will spend more of it with myself.
If it is for a day, I will travel the nearest place.
>> If it is for a day, I will travel to the nearest place.
If it\'s for a month, I will travel the Spain.
>> If it\'s for a month, I will travel to Spain.
Because it place what I want to go to there.
>> This is a place where I really want to go.
And I will do something I have never experienced.
>> I want to do something I have never experienced.
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