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2019-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. assertive 2. go-getter 3. self-assured 4. fling 5. slightly intoxicated I hate assertive people, but I like a go-getter. I do not insist on my way even though I am sefl-assured. I should not have flings with many ladies, but I cannot help philandering. I avoid to fight with men who are drunk although they are slightly intoxicated.

강사 첨삭

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Jean


1. assertive
2. go-getter
3. self-assured
4. fling
5. slightly intoxicated


I hate assertive people, but I like a go-getter.

>> I hate assertive people, but I like go-getters.

>> or: I have an aversion to assertive people, but I admire go-getters. 


 I do not insist on my way even though I am sefl-assured.

>> I don\'t insist on doing everything my own way though I\'m self-assured. 


 I should not have flings with many ladies, but I cannot help philandering.

>> CORRECT~~


 I avoid to fight with men who are drunk although they are slightly intoxicated.

>> I avoid altercations or fights with men who are drunk and even the slightly intoxicated ones.

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