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1. assertive
2. go-getter
3. self-assured
4. fling
5. slightly intoxicated
I hate assertive people, but I like a go-getter.
>> I hate assertive people, but I like go-getters.
>> or: I have an aversion to assertive people, but I admire go-getters.
I do not insist on my way even though I am sefl-assured.
>> I don\'t insist on doing everything my own way though I\'m self-assured.
I should not have flings with many ladies, but I cannot help philandering.
>> CORRECT~~
I avoid to fight with men who are drunk although they are slightly intoxicated.
>> I avoid altercations or fights with men who are drunk and even the slightly intoxicated ones.
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