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When I get stress, I usually sing loudly and dance in my room with loud song. And also I punch my dolls. Also I talk with my dolls. Or I talk to myself. If I do these things I feel good.
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Writing Task: How do you fight stress? Please explain your answer.
When I get stress, I usually sing loudly and dance in my room with loud song.
>>When I get stressed, I usually sing loudly and dance in my room with loud song.
And also I punch my dolls.
>>And I also punch my dolls.
Also I talk with my dolls. Or I talk to myself.
>>I even talk to my dolls or talk to myself.
If I do these things I feel good.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I feel better if I do these things.
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