Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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1 I want to go out to dance competition.
>> I want to join a dance competition.
2 I asked to see the director.
>> CORRECT~~
3 The child run to his mother for protection.
>> The child ran to his mother for protection.
>> Or: The child runs to his mother for protection.
4 My father and i like the movie the avengers.
>> My father and I like the movie The Avengers.
5 My father collected the Iron man.
>> My father collected the Iron Man action figures.
6 I have a avengers\'pen.
>> I have an Avenger\'s pen.
>> or: I have Avenger\'s pens.
7 I think a good sports is a table tennis,soccer,badmintion.
>> I think table tennis, soccer, and badminton are good sports.
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