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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. Well, as a person living in a country with four seasons, you must be sick and tired of it. But for me, I always wonder how fall and winter season are like. I\'m curious about the changes in each season.
- T. Beth
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When I was child, I was learned that country having four seasons is best site regarding weather.
>>> When I was a child, I have learned that countries with four seasons have the best weather.
However, as I get old, I have a question, \"Are four seasons the best for living?\".
>>> However, as I got old, I have asked, \"Are four seasons the best for living?\"
Further, these days I hate these four seasons and while spring and winter\'s duration is reduced, I have a curiosity on truth that Korea\'s weather consist of four seasons.
>>> Furthermore, these days I hate these four seasons. While spring and winter\'s duration are reduced, it made me curious if Korea\'s weather consist of four seasons.
I think country maintaining same climate over a year has a best weather in the world.
>>> I think countries with the same climate over a year has the best weather in the world.
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