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2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

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How do you imagine yourself living in Australia? I think I will get a part time job quickly. Actually, I really want to live with dog, so I will looking for a house who have a dog. I want to surf, so I will learn how to surf and then I will surf. I will expect to work at cafe as a barista. In addition, I want to make new friends. I heared there is desert in perth, so I want to go there. Do you konw Quokka? It is animal where live in perth. I really want to see them. Therefore, I will go to see them.

강사 첨삭

Charlie!


It will be indeed a dream come true for you if you will be able to work and live in Australia! So good luck!


~Teacher Josephine~

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I think I will get a part time job quickly.

>> CORRECT.


 Actually, I really want to live with dog, so I will looking for a house who have a dog.

>> I actually really want to live with a dog, so I will look for a house that accepts pets.


I want to surf, so I will learn how to surf and then I will surf.

>> CORRECT or >> I want to surf, so I will learn surfing.


I will expect to work at cafe as a barista.

>> I\'m expecting to work at a café as a barista.


In addition, I want to make new friends.

>> CORRECT.


 I heared there is desert in perth, so I want to go there.

>> I have heard that there is a desert in Perth, so I want to go there.


 Do you konw Quokka? It is animal where live in perth.

>> Do you know quokka? It is an animal that lives in Perth.


I really want to see them.

>> CORRECT.


 Therefore, I will go to see them.

>> CORRECT.

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