Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Charlie!
It will be indeed a dream come true for you if you will be able to work and live in Australia! So good luck!
~Teacher Josephine~
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I think I will get a part time job quickly.
>> CORRECT.
Actually, I really want to live with dog, so I will looking for a house who have a dog.
>> I actually really want to live with a dog, so I will look for a house that accepts pets.
I want to surf, so I will learn how to surf and then I will surf.
>> CORRECT or >> I want to surf, so I will learn surfing.
I will expect to work at cafe as a barista.
>> I\'m expecting to work at a café as a barista.
In addition, I want to make new friends.
>> CORRECT.
I heared there is desert in perth, so I want to go there.
>> I have heard that there is a desert in Perth, so I want to go there.
Do you konw Quokka? It is animal where live in perth.
>> Do you know quokka? It is an animal that lives in Perth.
I really want to see them.
>> CORRECT.
Therefore, I will go to see them.
>> CORRECT.
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