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1. concise
- Articles written by reporters should be concise to being able to understand easily.
>> Articles written by reporters should be concise for easy understanding.
2. crucial
- Some of reporters, especially newcomers in the company, are likely to miss crucial points in their articles.
>> Some reporters, especially newcomers, are likely to miss crucial points in their articles.
3. verbose
- If articles are verbose, readers would not understand.
>> correct
4. pertinent
- That\'s why many reporters usually quote pertinent research results related with the occasion.
>> or: For this reason, many reporters usually quote pertinent researches and references related to their article.
5. knowledgeable
- Quoting pertinent research results could cause that reporters seem to be knowledgeable.
>> Quoting pertinent researches could make a reporter seem knowledgeable.
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