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2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think my biggest fear is to become a nuisance. When I do something with someone, I\'m always nervous not to do make any mistake. Well, being nervous not to make any mistake is nomal, I think. But for me, it\'s a bit excessive. My mom tells me I have to not fear about making any mistake, but it isn\'t easy.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I agree with your mom.

Failure and mistakes are a part of life.

They will teach you more lessons than you can imagine.

Embrace them and develop yourself.

I believe in you.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think my biggest fear is to become a nuisance.
>> Correct
When I do something with someone, I\'m always nervous not to do make any mistake.
>> When I do something with someone, I\'m always careful not to make any mistake.
Well, being nervous not to make any mistake is nomal, I think.

>> I think being afraid to make a mistake is normal. 

But for me, it\'s a bit excessive.
>> Correct
My mom tells me I have to not fear about making any mistake, but it isn\'t easy.

>> My mom tells me not to be scared of making mistakes but it isn\'t easy for me.

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