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2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

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1. Do you get enough sleep? If not, what stops you from sleeping enough? I always get enough sleep. When I was go to bed, I could sleep easily. However, I was experienced that I do not get enough sleep. It is because of the exam. When I had exam in t he past, I did not get enough sleep. I wanted good grade. Except for the exam, I usually get enough sleep. Most people I think what stops they from sleeping enough is phone. It distrubs getting enough sleep. Therefore, I think the worst part is using phone.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Charlie!


It; good that you can easily fall asleep. However, it not in my case. I don\'t know why, maybe because of the  some factors like drinking too much coffee during the day. It somehow disrupts the pattern of a person\'s sleep. Anyways, I love coffee so I won\'t give it up but on the other had I also love sleep so I will also not give up on it! hahaha. Complicated, right?


~Teacher Josephine~

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I always get enough sleep.

>> CORRECT


When I was go to bed, I could sleep easily.

>> When I go to bed I can easily fall asleep.


However, I was experienced that I do not get enough sleep.

>> However, I have experienced to not be able to get enough sleep.


 It is because of the exam.

>> It was because of my exam.


When I had exam in t he past, I did not get enough sleep.

>> When I was going to have an exam, I did not enough sleep.


I wanted good grade.

>> I wanted to get good grades.


Except for the exam, I usually get enough sleep.

>>I usually get enough sleep. expect during an examination.


 Most people I think what stops they from sleeping enough is phone.

>> Most people think that what stops them from getting enough sleep is their phones.


It distrubs getting enough sleep.

>> It disturbs them from getting enough sleep.


Therefore, I think the worst part is using phone.

>> CORRECT.

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