Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Charlie!
It; good that you can easily fall asleep. However, it not in my case. I don\'t know why, maybe because of the some factors like drinking too much coffee during the day. It somehow disrupts the pattern of a person\'s sleep. Anyways, I love coffee so I won\'t give it up but on the other had I also love sleep so I will also not give up on it! hahaha. Complicated, right?
~Teacher Josephine~
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I always get enough sleep.
>> CORRECT
When I was go to bed, I could sleep easily.
>> When I go to bed I can easily fall asleep.
However, I was experienced that I do not get enough sleep.
>> However, I have experienced to not be able to get enough sleep.
It is because of the exam.
>> It was because of my exam.
When I had exam in t he past, I did not get enough sleep.
>> When I was going to have an exam, I did not enough sleep.
I wanted good grade.
>> I wanted to get good grades.
Except for the exam, I usually get enough sleep.
>>I usually get enough sleep. expect during an examination.
Most people I think what stops they from sleeping enough is phone.
>> Most people think that what stops them from getting enough sleep is their phones.
It distrubs getting enough sleep.
>> It disturbs them from getting enough sleep.
Therefore, I think the worst part is using phone.
>> CORRECT.
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