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2019-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> How could you avoid having a humongous bill? When I went to mart while I was childhood, I buy a lot of things without thinking. So, I usually made a humongous bill and usually got a scold from my mother because of it. Because of these reason, she let me to make a list to buy things in order to reduce consumption. It worked so well that I could reduce my consumption habit.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this. That\'s the dangerous part about shopping without a specific list of what to buy. I know because I have been doing that too. :D

- T. Beth

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When I went to mart while I was childhood, I buy a lot of things without thinking.

>>> Whenever I went to the mart in my childhood, I bought a lot of things without thinking.   

So, I usually made a humongous bill and usually got a scold from my mother because of it.

>>> So, I usually had a humongous bill and usually got scolded by my mother because of it.  

Because of these reason, she let me to make a list to buy things in order to reduce consumption.

>>> Because of this reason, she let me to make a list of what things to buy in order to reduce expenses.    

It worked so well that I could reduce my consumption habit.

>>>  It worked so well that I could reduce my spending habit. 

 

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