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2019-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hello, Beth. I did my homework late. When I met Andi, I changed my mind and attitude. I almost did my homework. So that gave me good effect. I want to feel this again. I think confidence is significant for me. Two years ago, I was very nervous talking to foreigners. I worried that I speak incorrect English sentence. So I started power English. And now I speak in English better. But I know my skill is less yet. I try to learn English. Help me :) I’m happy that I met good teacher. I look forward to atudying with you. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. I appreciate your effort on sending this in. Everything is possible as long as you put effort in it. Like studying English, it only needs practice and application to be good in speaking it. I will help you in the best way I can, but it is something you and I should work on together. Good luck! See you.

- T. Beth

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Hello, Beth. 

>>> CORRECT. 
I did my homework late. 

>>> CORRECT.  
When I met Andi, I changed my mind and attitude. 

>>> CORRECT. 
I almost did my homework.

>>> CORRECT. 

So that gave me good effect.

>>> OR: So that affected me in good way. 

I want to feel this again.
>>> CORRECT.    
I think confidence is significant for me. 

>>> CORRECT. 

Two years ago, I was very nervous talking to foreigners.

>>> CORRECT. 

I worried that I speak incorrect English sentence.

>>>  OR: I was worried that I spoke incorrect English sentences. 

So I started power English.

>>> so I started taking classes in Power English.

And now I speak in English better. 

>>> CORRECT. 
But I know my skill is less yet.

>>> But I know my skill is not that good yet. 

I try to learn English.

>>> CORRECT. 

Help me :) 

>>> CORRECT.     

I’m happy that I met good teacher. 

>>>  I’m happy that I met a good teacher.   
I look forward to atudying with you.

>>> I look forward to studying with you. 
See you soon.

>>> CORRECT.   

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