Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
Yes you are right first impression is always important!
~Teacher Josephine~
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I can not understand what kind of beauty.
>> I don\'t understand what kind of beauty it is.
If it means having a beauty face, I think it is important.
>> CORRECT
I think that first impression is really important if you meet strange person.
>> I think that first impression is really important if you meet a stranger.
I am trying to make a good impression always.
>> I try to make good impression always.
If you are going to interview you really want to get this job, you are going to wear formal clothes and you are going to make a good impression.
>> If you are going to an interview and you really want to get the job, you are going to wear formal clothes and you are going to make a good impression.
Therefore, it is important for me and it is important most people as well.
>> Therefore, it is important for me and it is important for most people as well.
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